Masantha (EUW)
: Bilgewater Fan Fiction Competition - Results Are In!
Thank you to everyone that voted for me!! Oh my gosh!! I'm relieved to hear that the runners up will be getting some cool prizes too!! Congrats everyone ;u; <3
Masantha (EUW)
: Bilgewater Fan Fiction Competition - Voting Now Closed
skena82 (EUW)
: Very nice written mate! Your story has everything it needs and my vote for the competition. Keep up the good work. {{sticker:slayer-jinx-wink}} {{item:2012}}
Thanks friend! <3
: this is nice. good job !!!
thank you !!!
: This is the level of quality I would expect from a frontrunner in the competition. Very nicely written. I will be inspired by this when I write my own attempt. I like how you used the entirety of the word limit, that will help me in planning. The language is on point (bonus points for British English). Exposition and Characterization is extremely well done. I love your characterisation of the Snatcher. Like the drooling. Very clever. I feel like I actually know the character very well even though I have only read one paragraph. The story is self contained, without loose ends, which is nice. I think you could have gone heavier into symbolism. From your writing style I would expect you could pull it off pretty well, and it would add a bit of depth. Alternatively, character development could have been nice (is Maelle traumatised now or emboldened? Will he seek out Pyke or fear him?). But you went the action-packed route, which is certainly a wise choice given the word count constraints. Both symbolism and character development usually take a lot of words to unfold, so I know I'm asking very much. Please interpret this as a compliment, if you will, because I want to imply you could pull it off if you wanted to. All in all, with only 1000 words you absolutely have to prioritise. And you did very well. Your story has everything it needs and my vote for the competition. I look forward to reading your future works.
Oh wow! Thank you kindly ;u; If I were to rewrite this, I would push myself a little bit further with my writing. This was the first time I had written something in a long time, so I wasn't as confident with what I was doing and how it would be recieved. Looking forward to see your own entry!
Masantha (EUW)
: Bilgewater Fan Fiction Contest example - A Quiet Day in Bilgewater
: yo this is genuinely impressive.
Thanks my dude :o
: I really love this story. I'm a freaking lore nerd. And this tickled my pickles
I'm glad that it uh... tickled your lore pickles! Thank you!
blissbomb (EUW)
: I like that this fanfic is actually decently written. You actually seem to understand how writing works! It's beautiful. The word use is great at setting the scene and such a darkness in tone is always fun to see. I also like the way the reader is left with such little context of events as it allows them to imagine a significant portion of the world and build up to events. Most of what I've seen makes me want to rip my balls off in anger at the poor quality of language use but this is clearly written by someone who has a vocabulary above that of a tweleve-year-old. Certainly one of the better pieces of fanfiction. - An avid reader, amateur writer and up and coming English scholar.
I'm glad I've saved your nethers from your own wrath, but more so that you enjoyed my story! Thanks for your kind words :)
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